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	<title>Comments on: Somebody Asked, So I&#8217;ll Explain</title>
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		<title>By: Thomas Pellechia</title>
		<link>http://excellentproj.com/2011/06/27/somebody-asked-so-ill-explain/comment-page-1/#comment-7974</link>
		<dc:creator>Thomas Pellechia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 28 Jun 2011 21:01:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Two of your readers were at the dinner, and we missed you.

Don&#039;t worry when I don&#039;t comment--it could mean that you were spot on with whatever you posted, and I don&#039;t want to encourage that kind of thing...if I did, it would leave me with nothing to say.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Two of your readers were at the dinner, and we missed you.</p>
<p>Don&#8217;t worry when I don&#8217;t comment&#8211;it could mean that you were spot on with whatever you posted, and I don&#8217;t want to encourage that kind of thing&#8230;if I did, it would leave me with nothing to say.</p>
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		<title>By: Tom Johnson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tom Johnson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 28 Jun 2011 18:31:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>As for writing and rewriting -- rewriting is everything, and the rewrite I was asked for was not unwarranted. I used to teach writing and what I told people over and over was that they should just write something down and then go back and fix it. People who try to rewrite as they go don&#039;t ever finish a draft.

My metaphor is this: there are two kinds of sculpture, one is additive (putting things onto other things) and one is subtractive (chiseling away at the stone). People think writing is additive, but it&#039;s not. Really, it&#039;s about taking the stone -- the first draft -- and chiseling it into shape.

Smart as I am, you&#039;d think I&#039;d have more than three readers.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As for writing and rewriting &#8212; rewriting is everything, and the rewrite I was asked for was not unwarranted. I used to teach writing and what I told people over and over was that they should just write something down and then go back and fix it. People who try to rewrite as they go don&#8217;t ever finish a draft.</p>
<p>My metaphor is this: there are two kinds of sculpture, one is additive (putting things onto other things) and one is subtractive (chiseling away at the stone). People think writing is additive, but it&#8217;s not. Really, it&#8217;s about taking the stone &#8212; the first draft &#8212; and chiseling it into shape.</p>
<p>Smart as I am, you&#8217;d think I&#8217;d have more than three readers.</p>
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		<title>By: Tom Johnson</title>
		<link>http://excellentproj.com/2011/06/27/somebody-asked-so-ill-explain/comment-page-1/#comment-7972</link>
		<dc:creator>Tom Johnson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 28 Jun 2011 18:28:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I sooooo wanted to be at that dinner, but just could not shake myself loose. It is a profound regret that I couldn&#039;t make it.

And I do miss you, Thomas, when you don&#039;t comment. It worries me that you&#039;re not commenting because I&#039;m not writing anything interesting. I feel that way about all (both) my regulars -- seriously -- and it helps keep me engaged.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I sooooo wanted to be at that dinner, but just could not shake myself loose. It is a profound regret that I couldn&#8217;t make it.</p>
<p>And I do miss you, Thomas, when you don&#8217;t comment. It worries me that you&#8217;re not commenting because I&#8217;m not writing anything interesting. I feel that way about all (both) my regulars &#8212; seriously &#8212; and it helps keep me engaged.</p>
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		<title>By: Thomas Pellechia</title>
		<link>http://excellentproj.com/2011/06/27/somebody-asked-so-ill-explain/comment-page-1/#comment-7971</link>
		<dc:creator>Thomas Pellechia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 28 Jun 2011 14:48:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m hurt. You didn&#039;t even ask why I haven&#039;t been around lately. Butt hen, I suppose you knew, since Sam asked you to join us in Sonoma and you demurred.

As for &quot;rewrite:&quot; isn&#039;t that the definition of the word &quot;write?&quot;

Having said that, no editor has ever asked me for a rewrite--it&#039;s usually requested in command form...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m hurt. You didn&#8217;t even ask why I haven&#8217;t been around lately. Butt hen, I suppose you knew, since Sam asked you to join us in Sonoma and you demurred.</p>
<p>As for &#8220;rewrite:&#8221; isn&#8217;t that the definition of the word &#8220;write?&#8221;</p>
<p>Having said that, no editor has ever asked me for a rewrite&#8211;it&#8217;s usually requested in command form&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Steve</title>
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		<dc:creator>Steve</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 28 Jun 2011 01:44:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Phew.  I thought you were off someplace having fun.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Phew.  I thought you were off someplace having fun.</p>
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		<title>By: Tom Johnson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tom Johnson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 27 Jun 2011 19:26:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I do not understand why editors ask for rewrites, though it frustrates me that my genius goes unappreciated. Every word I write is gold!

As for the traffic thing, I think it means that people, in general, like me better when I&#039;m quiet. An ordinary person would take a message from that. I am, however, abnormal.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I do not understand why editors ask for rewrites, though it frustrates me that my genius goes unappreciated. Every word I write is gold!</p>
<p>As for the traffic thing, I think it means that people, in general, like me better when I&#8217;m quiet. An ordinary person would take a message from that. I am, however, abnormal.</p>
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		<title>By: Wine Curmudgeon</title>
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		<dc:creator>Wine Curmudgeon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 27 Jun 2011 19:18:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A rewrite? What horrible editor would make you rewrite something?</description>
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		<title>By: Samantha Dugan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Samantha Dugan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 27 Jun 2011 17:56:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Same damn thing happens to me! I don&#039;t write and my numbers and subscribers go up. You think they are trying to tell us something?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Same damn thing happens to me! I don&#8217;t write and my numbers and subscribers go up. You think they are trying to tell us something?</p>
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